needs work...

but can be fixed. try a storyline. add a few sound fx, terrain warning alarms, a pilot. a plane that doesnt look like a screwed up spear. perhaps even sound. but it can be good. take the plane scene in fallen angel. even as a side note, it is noticeable.

Snakes on a Plane - Snakes = 1

OK, well it felt sorta artsy, in a way. Sorta. I guess it was supposed to represent a memorial to Jenny, or a pilot's suicide, and the note was from the pilot? Anyway.... sound.

Sry

This flash isn't all that good: missing sound, nothing in airplane, no story....and maybe your plane was too long.
Don't be too sad: you can make a great flash if you take your time to do it.
Don't submit something that took you like an hour or so pls: most of the time it makes a crappy flash :p

needs work

this movie needs work
needs-
sound
better drawing
and more dramatic
also a story linec would be nice