hmmm
that was pretty good for a first but try and work on finishing your anims ok?
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okay, this is my first flash. can any give me any tips? i aim to improve my skills. no comments such as "OMG NOOB KILLED FLASH WTF lol!!!1" please... i only want helpful criticism. OH and enjoy my first flash. :D
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The beginning looked awesome.. and when they started fighting i was waiting for something to happen.. but it ended too quickly.. and you should add some gun sounds and kick sounds and stuff like that..... but if it is your first flash then it is very good one..
Loved it
It was awsome but you ended it to quick
Yeah...
I've seen better flash movies than this.
Quite bad.
You have some potential, no doubt, bu this move has a LOT wrong with it. From choppy movement to strange explosions to odd transitions, this movie really isn't that great. I do, however, praise some decent music and half-decent blood effects. Keep practicing!