Here is the third part,will click in the text to continue
Refer to my comment on the previous episode.
Your dialogue is getting worse. It's recommended that you slow down while producing this series. Once more, it's a decent series with a good plot and storyline, but the grammer and spelling errors are destroying it.
God... that was terrible
I agree with the two guys bellow me. Seriously, wtf with the dialogs ?
"Yuo need to blah.
- Ok"
Ok ok ok
TERRIBLE
Check your grammer please. Worst Dialogue ever... Oh, and Albatross, I'm glad to see there are a few decent critics around.
woah...
What happens when you take Naruto, mix it with Digimon, throw in some Mega Man, and add a handfull of All your Base? You get This Load of Crap Right Here. Really, grammer. And a stable story would be nice.
Cool movie
I like the original Idea, very nice!