This is something new, and I think it is a good idea. You definitely will need to make more though if you want them to get popular.
This is new...
Fun and interesting, I like it, goodjob.
"Future issues will have animation/video/sound and hopefully sprawl into more of an interactive online magazine. For now it's quite simple just to get it started."
Translation: I was too lazy to make this anything more than a flash document that slides around the screen. I can see the appeal for trying something like this, but it shouldnt be submitted as a FILM on newgrounds, when its not a film. Its an article. You should set up a flash website and embed these in it.
If you wanted to impress you should have blown the load on this first...thing. Gone all out. This is like a crappy powerpoint presentation.
Also.....seriously....you reviewed Grand Theft Auto 4? Review something more recent. GTA has been out for months and everyone already knows it was bad.
No real redeeming value.
And now Mbot will delete this honest review.