it was alright..
it got alittle boring abit slow... but not bad
Author Comments
This is one of my first flash animations, you can clearly tell the progression in style from begining to end. More to come. I am not an artist.
Holy crap, there are actually comments.
umm..okay i guess...
it was great for a first flash, and i loved the cloaking thing you made, but it was really slow and the people were drawn bad....
Kinda cool, but dull....
The drawing could use a bit of improvement, and after a couple of minutes I started to get bored with it. It's very slow paced, and not very exciting, but still, cloaking warships blowing things up, gotta love it :)
Slow paced but a obviously developed story
Very slow to start enough that some could lose interest very fast so keep it going at a faster pace which you will develope as you start making more clips but i like the way the plot is going so far so if you make it past judgement i encourage you to keep making them
well... it needs work
the objects do not move naturally. dont get upset, it's not bad stuff, you just need to be a little more realistic with what you're trying to accomplish here.