I'll judge this on the full version. It's good, but needs more depth. Choosing requium was a great choice, really did wonders for the atmosphere. I found myself wondering who people were, what was really going on and so on. I think it needs speaking parts. I think you could make a great series here if you got going good. Keep it up. As for watching this bit, it's not much, but I suppose it gives you a taster.