Okay, I'm done. After half a year, and four tries, I finally finished this. There are few things I'd like to say before you watch this:
First, if you haven't already seen these:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=IvNkGm8mxiM
and
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=ufYF0f-zMgY
Watch those before you see the movie, or all the jokes will go over your head.
Second, I'd like to point out that Cloverfield is one of my all-time favorite movies, and I think everyone on earth should see it, but i have a few jokes that i just need to get out of my system. (It would probably have made more sense to make this while Cloverfield was still in theaters, but my defense is that I didn't know how to use Flash back then.)
Third, I'd just like to point out that I had to set the sounds in the preloader to "Event", so they may be a little out of sync. Also, please note that the preloader animation makes it look like the movie has stopped loading, but it has not, so don't exit it.
Finally, I'd just like to point out that the reason I added subtitles was because the dialog was to hard to understand (This is due to a phenomenon known in most scientific circles as "crappy microphone".)
So, I'm done writing this, I hope you like this, and if not, please give me some constructive criticism and advise, please don't be all "dude ur movie sucked"
I hate that.
Enjoy!
-The Animator
gr8!
gr8, gr8, gr8,,, grrrrrrrrrr8! grrrrrrrRRRRRrrrrrRRRRRrrrrrrRRRRR8tt tttttt!
zomg giant carrot! What's japan? seriously, what is Japan?
Naah, just joking. I know "Japan" is the name of a street. Btw... he really should've give that 11 dollars erlier... xD
Man, I've been so wrapped up in my next project, I completely forgot about this animation. But yeah, thanks for the praise, and keep an eye out for my next cartoon.
I haven't fallen off the face of the Earth yet...
-The Animator
If you would just take out the pauses
Pauses are a very good thing for comedic purposes but just like anything if you over use it, it becomes worthless, and then it becomes just annoying. If you were to take out a lot of the pauses but add it at only key point in the movie it would be funnier. Other than that though its an ok flash.
I was thinking about editing the movie to shorten the pauses, but unfortunatly, my computer got a virus, and I lost the file, so I missed that opportunity. I will, however, avoid long pauses in my future animations, and, in fact, I wrote a joke that mocks the really long pauses here into my next animation. :D
-The Animator
Great Movie!
I love this movie!
I found myself chuckling the whole time I was watching this! Also what made this movie even more better was the fact that I just got done watching the movie "Cloverfield"
Although the movie was funny...
There were a few things that kinda bothered me.
Like it was kinda hard to understand (But that wasn't to bad because you had captions)
Also it was kinda hard to follow
And to many times were NOTHING was happening. But I don't know if you intentionally added the long pauses to make it funny?
Well aside from all of those things I thought it was an awesome movie, this is definitely going to my favorites and I will send this to as many of my friends as possible in hopes that they will get the same amount of chuckles that I did!
Animation: 7/10
Graphics: 8/10
Funny: 10/10
Easy to follow: 8/10
Over All: 9/10
5/5
Great Movie! Keep it up!
Thanks for the awesome comment! BTW, I did add the pauses because I thought it would make the animation a bit funnier (of course, you can see the great reception on THAT one...) So, glad I have a small-scale publicity agent now (lol), and again, thanks for the awesome comment!
-The Animator
i don't like it cuz
you drag out the jokes to much next time try making up more jokes and don't use them for a long time
pretty good
I actually didn't like cloverfield. But whatever, this video was good. It had some funny jokes. Especially good for a beginner! You'll get better, you actually got a pretty good score. Don't get discouraged because of some of the reviews! Keep it up!
Thanks for teh encouragement and high score! Glad you liked my movie.
-The Animator