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A Little SHort and I'm gonna point out, (It's not A uke) bt it still awsome. Pleae make more!
Author Comments
This is actually my second Crew Expendable submission, but the first was in a game ( B.T.'s CoD4). This one is probably better. My strong points in this are gun design and blood. Hope you like!
It's a start
The graphics, to put it bluntly, were not very good. Surfaces lacked detail, guns were just gradient blocks of grey, and characters were just shapes with no features.
The audio was pretty much standard sound, which is fine. However, the ripped audio from CoD4 sounded pretty hokey. If everyone actually spoke in something other than text, it might seem less so, but it's just odd for the sake of the movie that only some people can speak with actual sound.
To improve, I would purchase a mic and record the dialogue yourself. Also, I would work on detailing the backgrounds, characters, and weapons. Give them a sense of depth and character that they sorely lack now. As it is, there's just a few flesh colored circles running around. Make the audience care about your characters. As is, I could care less if they lived or died.
Hope you can take some of my advice into consideration for your next flash.
- battosai810
BradManThompson responds:
Hey, your right. It isn't that good. Also, I LOVE YOUR SUBMISSIONS. Your CoD 4 multiplayer parody was my inspiration, but my vid comes nowhere close to yours.
haha!
I love cod4. I have cod5 now.
But still, this is freaking funny to me,
fix the sound. fix it up and maybe front page some day.
BradManThompson responds:
Well, I'm actually working on a CoD 5 video based on the level Burn Em' Out. Expect to see it within the next week!