cool

although this wa kind of random it as pretty good well done again micsa

happy posting

Simply... no

I know you did this on an act of randomness and it isn't "really" for a school project. Lip Sync was Bad, Ads don't have credits etc. etc.

hmm..

right there are some things to work on first of all your voice acting is no that great and lip synching is not perfect. redo this flash again and try and learn some flash tutorials. other than that a nice first try.

Redo

the sound didn't match and was muffled, no music, and there were too many pauses so redo it

lip syncing

the animation was okay, but you really need lip syncing help.