If you can create this then you should make characters! Your make a great flash cartoon BSG series!
Cool man I'm a big fan of this series and this was a nice little flash represntation of the first episode. Could try emulating the rocking of the view point camera a bit to try get more action-y look out of it.
this is without a doubt one of the best flash films i have ever seen!
Next time rotoscope a full episode. Google Rotoscoping.
for a shooting flash with no story:D