not bad for your first time in animation, but I needed some work on it, so very good presentation!!!
Author Comments
Hey! This is my first (completed) flash, I hope you enjoy it!
The grammar errors are on purpose, That's engrish for you. ;D
It features my pals From the TaT on Gaiaonline.com!
The first time it was uploaded, the music from the first run would continue on the second time if you presed replay. I fixed that though, so it's all good. =D
Not bad for a first submission animation needs to be a little smoother but other than that solid work needed voice acting tho
It was ok...
It was alright for your first. You need to work on making your animations a little smoother, it kind of jumped between each drawing. A little voice acting would have been a plus, even some kind of text to speech audio. Next time, put a little time into it. But good job, keep on trying, I've seen much worse.
Not bad...
It's not bad for your first flash!But just try to improve the animation more.It's a little choppy at parts.
(title in work)
Hmm...Not sure exactly what to say here. You seem to switch between good and then terrible drawings at random parts in the movie. Try not to use shape tweens so much, they always look terrible, especially with fills. Progression through the movie was very slow and boring.