Not Bad

The only reason I give it 8/10 is because you could have used a better choice of sprites but you made a good animation.Maybe you could make it longer aswell.

Again pretty good

After watching this I'm even more confused... but it's a good thing because now I have to watch future episodes as well. This confusion keeps me interested. ;)

I noticed that you now used arrows instead of dots to indicate which character is speaking. Now the speech bubbles LOOK like speech bubbles. Much less confusing than in the first episode where at first I thought the characters where just thinking.

But I noticed some annoying spelling errors like the infamous "there"/"they're" and "your"/"you're" errors. Those can be really easily avoided and will make the flash a lot better if they are avoided. ;)
So, every time you want to write "your" speak out lout the sentence with the words "you are". If it doesn't make sense, then "your" is right. Otherwise you want to type "you're". ;)

The action is again very nice in this flash. I hope you can keep this up.

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Slightly better than the last...

Art/Animation: 6/10
As I said with the first one, it's just sprites, so I can't award major marks here. You used some nice parallax effects here, and nothing seemed too bad..

Plot/Concept: 7/10
Still nothing absolutely captivating, but I found the Megaman storyline quite interesting..

Audio/Music: 7/10
Still nothing wrong with the audio in terms of ambience and background, but it felt empty, and I really think it needs voice actors..I know froom experience that VAs are fairly easy to find, if you know where to look. If you need a hand getting VAs, PM me.

Overall: 6/10
Slightly better than the previous, but nothing that has grabbed my attention too much yet..

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Hmmm

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Just as good as the first one if not a bit better. Smooth animations and again you had some more advanced stuff rather than the normal sprites that you see from noobs. (Again like me lol)

~ Story/Content ~

I loved how in the beginning you backtracked just a little bit so we could see the other side of a story. That really makes the flash interesting so we can understand why things happened the way they did and really makes it look like you know what your doing when creating a script.

It seems like there is more behind this then just the random invasion and that perhaps some evil character is trying to get rid of all the good sprite characters so it can take over the world or something of that sort. You set it up good so I'll have to watch the next one to find out.

~ Audio ~

Pretty much the same thing I said last time. The sound effects were well timed and the music went well with the animation. Voices might be interesting to try, but I just couldn't see them working in this type of flash.

~ Overall ~

Keep it up you are doing a great job. Perhaps work on the file size a bit though. This one was shorter than the last one, but had a larger file size. Have you been optimizing your audio?

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The plot thickens

A well designed piece, with well manipulated sprites and a great sense of timing. You've certainly put some good hard work into the piece and the main issue that you've had here is that it's quite sizeable in file terms, but not very long, so not much plot exposition can take place.

Still, you did your best and gave us an entertaining show. Perhaps Mario and Luigi could have gotten as far as Bowser's place, to talk to him, perhaps shedding a crucial bit of light on the subject. Other than that, you can't really take it much further, unless you chop something off this and add it to episode 1. That little moan aside, I still think it's a good piece. How long before the next one rolls out?

I still think that a subtitles bar would work much better than speech bubbles. Good work with Dr. Light though and the whole Binary piece, when he started to fall apart.

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