Ummm this started out as just a little animation practice so i really didn't get into a lot of detail. I liked the idea so i put a story to it and here it is. Tell me weather or not i should make a sequel. sorry about the white borders for some reason the keep showing up and i cant fix it.
Yea i have no idea how to fix that border dude
Yay hayward :D
Just clean it up like make the lines abit more solid and change teh background
Also some of the perspectives in some frames were awkward
You might wanna watch it again find the frames and fix them trust me man itll look much more sexy =]
not bad
it was good...but i will have to agree with demonvaan...I think white would be better than red
Nice!
this was well done. I loved the style of animation used although it could have been polished up a bit. Also, there were a couple of spots where the dialog was very quiet and hard to hear, but other than that great job.
Pretty good!
The only thing that you really need to do is crop the sides of the window, and you're golden.
