Haha
Haha this was amusing for sure, I belive that some "SUBTITLES" would be great for this, you have some nice characters here and nice theme with star trek and rapping up music, lol.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
One thing I have found that vocals are great in any flash but subtitles along with those vocals make it a much better experience, So this is something you should think about adding, and it would be a nice option and make your flash abit more quality based. anyways nice effort.
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