not bad
If you actually came with a stronger storyline, with your animation skills you'd be doing some really good work, essentially all I'm saying is you've got potential
Author Comments
I've been a member of Newgrounds for a while now, so decided its about time I put something up
Just a little animation I started a while back for college, and only just got round to finishing.
I've not really done much with flash before, but yeah this is my first submission so i hope you like it. :)
Song: David Grey - This Years Love
Deathbyfishslap responds:
thanks man , what i like to hear :) , gimme a bit more practice and i'll have a shot at a longer one :D
oh my .... (0.o)
Oh.
So that's why those tags are there ^_^
That was cute and the ending was really unexpected.
In other words, I loved it!
~ellebirdy23
Deathbyfishslap responds:
thanks very much :D
cute
the characters were cute. it was pretty short and didn't get the point of it. but as cute as they were you should make another one that's longer and has a bit of a story in it.
Deathbyfishslap responds:
thanks alot , i guess it is kinda pointless , but was only a short. cheers for your oppinion :D
haha! hehehe
thats originals!
Deathbyfishslap responds:
thankyou :)
Alright...
The art was nice and the song was good too. But it was really short, and the ending isn't all that funny. making it a bit longer would really help.
Deathbyfishslap responds:
thanks. it was s'post to be longer but i got all lazy and such like
Credits & Info
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3.05 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Nov 9, 2008
- 7:41 PM EST
- Genre
- Comedy - Original