...I liked it, and I understood the premise a bit.
You know what, I've been waiting for somebody to use my music in a Flash for awhile, a good one anyway. But that's off subject, let's talk about your toon. You know what, I have to be honest: I liked it, and I understood the premise a bit. I would consider brushing up a bit on your writing. Not that it's bad, I like it. It's just hard to get the message. It's like WATCHMEN. You have to watch it twice at the very least to really get it.
Maybe you'll consider getting me to be the writer? :) This thing actually has franchise potential (i.e. Madness, Castle, etc.). I know it when I see it.
