HA!
Yeah, it was predone everything.
But the score should be higher than that. It was perfectly mixed together. Good job man.
Author Comments
PLEASE NOTE -
This is the first Flash animation I've made since I got out of college, so my memory of Flash was kinda hazy, and I know I must have messed up somewhere. In the actual Flash document, everything runs just fine, but once published, there are a couple small glitches. Most notably, Dr. Hotti's mouth does not move at all when he speaks, even tho I animated it. Other small glitches include Mia occasionally not blinking when she could, and when she gives the ultimate confession towards the end, her sprite doesn't move at all except back away. If anyone can tell me how to fix these glitches, please drop me a line either here, or at emseesquared@yahoo.com, I'd be most appreciative.
Other than that, I hope you all enjoy ;)
wow
that was very funny and a very good flash keep up the good work. for this being ur first flash in awhile, i dint think u lost ur touch keep them coming ^.^
Clerks
I was actually pleasantly surprised by this. When I first saw this I thought it was going to be really stupid and blam material, but I was completely wrong. First off you did a great job utilizing the Phoenix Wright sprites. I personally have never seen a flash that uses these sprites and I really liked it and think they should be used way more often than they do. Next you used the sprites emotions really well to further show the emotion the original Clerks tried to express with this conversation.
Anyway I really liked this and I hope to see more things like this from you in the future. Definitely keep it up!
EmSeeSquared responds:
wow, you've never seen an animation with Phoenix Wright sprites? hehe I'm kinda surprised, it's becoming quite a practice since the game came out. Most parodies like to use the name "Phoenix Wrong", which is what I used too, hehe. I've actually never played the game, and know little about it. In fact, here's what inspired me to make this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFldBV WFgWo
Started slow
Started slow, but man did it get funny once the punch line was coming into focus. Great job with the Script writing.
Needs work on the audio, and started slow, I was about to x out and vote but decided to stay with it.
Review number is low because animation and all isn't that good, voted 3/5 because of the humor.
EmSeeSquared responds:
hahaha, well, i didn't write the script. it's from the movie "Clerks", so thank Kevin Smith. he's a legend, hehe ;)
and yea, the animation's a bit choppy, but that only happened once I published it. i don't know why. any advice on that?