its better than half th shit on here.
You spent time on it
You can tell you spent a lot of time on it but a few things to improve it greatly would be sound effects, music, and straight lines. The only reason I have it a six was because you know it was bad and want advice.
good rating, from me
I gave you a good rating seeing as you apologized for your work.
You gave me a very low expectation of this, but at least you made something. There have been submissions much worse than this I tell the.
nest thing you should work on is making the lines straighter on your next rockest,and doing some blending colour effects with the fire instead of just drawing squiggly lines.
Not too bad.
I actually enjoyed it. It would be nice if you had music for the whole thing.
sweet. i especially like the fire.