The tale of a Line..

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This is my 3rd ever animation, this time.. I focused on adding sounds. On the flash player everything is in snyc, hopefuly everything will go well.
Remember this is my 3RD animation and is mostly just a test.
All Frame by Frame and sounds made by me :) lol.
I'm looking for constructive advice here so please be gentle :)

Liam xx

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i liked it

the transformation was very smooth
make it a lot longer and have them interact more or something and this good be a front page

Liam3003 responds:

Glad you liked it :)
Front page? lol, I wish ;)

Thanks for the review!

For your third submission.....

Very good job.
Well animated and quirky theme.
I enjoyed viewing it and wish you luck in your flash career.

Liam3003 responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed watching it :)
All drawn by mouse and tbh wasn't a hard effort to put in.
I guess i'll make more and see if I improve.

Thanks for the review!


this is actually pretty good, but the sounds could have been better, i suggest using FindSounds or SoundDoggs for sound effects, the animation itself was a bit crappy itself, but it was okay, considering it was your 3rd.

good luck in the future

Liam3003 responds:

Like I said this was just a "practice" of using sounds and seeing what I could do with them, I made the sounds myself so I'm pretty happy with it ^^

Thanks for the review!

Credits & Info

3.05 / 5.00

Nov 5, 2008
7:55 PM EST