Not Much To It

The animation isn't bad. Concept had potential. But there really was not much to it. I was expecting some kind of adventure to come from the doodle, but I was disappointed. You could go somewhere this, but perhaps this was just one of those boredom flashes? But seriously, I'm sure if this was an idea you wanted to expand on, you could take the idea of doodles coming to life somewhere really interesting.

Title

I was bored in advanced Language Arts so I started a diary... lol.

Not too good and nothing too bad

Yeah we can see that you're are not an proffesionnal of flash ... Look at tutorials on the forum this will maybe help you to make betters flash

Short

The flash was OK, but it was way too short!!
If you make it longer I'll give it a better rate because the idea was good.