What can I say about this, its an ok submission, has its ups and downs, Some stuff can be Utilised better with content and such, But this entry certainly Has some good potential about it and can go even furtjer then it already is, and i do look forward to more of this, but anyways now for more details into this entry. Well you have outdone yourself on this one and have impressed this reviewer, I even like the added "SUBTITLES" there was some really nice visuals here, very well done work. After seeing and messing with this one I thought it was great, its a decent flash there is room for improvment, and you should think about adding some new stuff as mentioned below and even in the above review lines, it will be great for all, anyways keep up the work I like the effort you put in sofar, and look forward to seeing more.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I believe there are various little issues here or there that can be cleaned up, certainly there may be ways for ideas old and new to be Utilised somehow Not much is Required on yourpart either but lets look into a few things here. You did well on the flash overall I would only suggest maybe a lerger "VIEW-SCREEN" anyways untill next time.