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if you want views then make it easyer to view

Just make a play button,

My movie didn't start. So obviously you can make a button, or you can just look up a tutorial on how to. But i wasn't able to watch it, sorry.

Umm, it's ok...

The animation is decent enough, but there were a few problems:

1. The animation on the wisps coming up from the coffee cup were a bit distracting. Their movement, compared to the rest of the animation, seemed out of place.

2. There seems to be an issue with your layering. At one point, when the guy is going to his car, he cuts right through the parking meter he's supposed to be behind. At another point, when the camera pans to the big monster, the people magically pop outside of the shop for split second.

3. Why is the guy's shirt blinking as he walks to the car? If it's supposed to be from the neon sign, well, it looks wrong from a perspective point - the light is not in the foreground. Besides that, the sign isn't flickering that much.

4. I found the alternate ending thing funny, but the "Go back" buttons don't work.

5. You should be able to bypass the "right click and press play" note. It's not that hard to do in Flash.

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On the plus side, though:

1. The story sounds interesting.

2. I like the monster.

3. Is that distorted Wookie call I hear? :)

4. The artistic style you chose works just fine.

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I hope you fix the above, because I'd like to see the finished version. ;)

Meh...

Okish. When you make a movie next time work on the glitches such as the man's shirt changing colors as you walk and the menu buttons not working. Also increase the pace of the movie seeing as though it was kinda slow.