Work on it a little more
The storyline looks pretty good, but the animations arent great. Make their motions more huamn like not like stiff. 6/10
Good stuff, man!
Good work on the flash. I was pretty entertained there, so 8 stars for you. The only thing I could advise on is keep practicing your drawing skills and control the SFX volume a little better.
And "Mexican standoffs"? Lol...
But you get 3 stars for reading World War Z. Such a good book.
I know how it is when you make a film; you want it to be perfect and you work really hard on it so when you're done, you're very proud of your creation,
then later when you submit it and some people say it's bad you're kind of let-down. I just want to say, don't be let down. Keep trying and you'll get a whole lot better
good flash. 5/5 8/10