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kind of cool.
I liked the animation. However, Mario was just running through the obstacles it was obviously just a bakground. Yet, the fighting wasn't bad it wasn't great either. Having some kind of reaction would have been nice. Yet, the farting in links face was original.
wow, that was so good. i liked when mario farted in links face.
Your getting better
Wow, you've improved a lot since your other past flashes. I can clearly see the improvements. Here's some thing you might want to fix though.
At the starting Mario's jump was a bit wonky. Like he'd jump than suddenly he'd be at the top of the screen. This only happened once though. I didn't like when they were fighting, Mario just levitated backward. I understand how clustered up things can get, maybe you were excited to get this finished. Take more time animating those little parts.This next one is really picky, but I thought you should know about it. At the end, Link's sword had little bits and pieces missing.
The positive things are: I thought it was funny the way Link was laying down with the mushrooms next to him. I thought the fighting was a lot better. A few things to look into are that when one of them gets hit, make their body maybe move to the side, so they react. Or you could add a few effects, like the screen shaking.
Great improvement. Good luck with your future animations. ^-^ 3/5 7/10
Not original but it could've been better