Well so its not all the time you see flash works like this especially in a movie form so i was actually suprised with how you presented this and how you let it flow from start to the end, So in that aspect of things it actually does get off to a decent start. Very good "AUDIO" pn this one and the animation was brilliant, as you move from one scene to the next it gets even better, Really nice Concept infact at times there was some surprising elements that made this that much better, so now we can see you are capable of bringing fourth some interesting and unique ideas full of life and beyond.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
In this little area of the review you can try some new ideas or even some old tricks of the past, but regardless lets try and improve on a few things and make this even better. Now here is one of those flash types that could do well from some subtitles now dont get me wrong this does not need subtitles but it would be something extra and nice for the viewer. So maybe adding some subtitles would be a big plus here.