Needs serious work
Well... It was not really that good. The animating was ehh, mediocre to bad... The voice acting was god awful... Or at least Yako's was. She sounded like a robot! All the dramaticness was killed by the cheesy voice acting. Music would have been nice. Maybe if you started earlier, you could have had more time, and with that time, greatly improved on this. Well that's enough constructive criticism for me.
I'm kinda a noob to Flash. I'm not good at voice acting so you dont have to tell me. Yako's Voice was a robot yes, I used sitepal to have the voice made. you type in and then their computer says it. I dont know any girls that even would let me ask them to be a voice without them calling me four eyes and try to embarrass me for the next week. But if i did, I would ask them. I dont want to bother you with all my reasons and blames on other people but it seriously isnt my fault. I thought to myself that music could of ruined it. Maybe in the spots where it's still. But i think it might of made it very messy. I thought i should of started earlier too. But i was too stupid to realize it. I was going to make it longer but Halloween struck to damn early. :(
The drawings were not that great, the voice were dull one was like Microsoft Sam. It was just pretty boring.
Well. I dont want to spend most of my time on it. It's just a flash vid. It wasnt microsoft sam. But I dont know any girls that would be the voice of yako.
Which one didn't return to normal? Anyway, good job but some closure would've been nice.
Of course stephen. He's the mindfreak. xD