Needs serious work
Well... It was not really that good. The animating was ehh, mediocre to bad... The voice acting was god awful... Or at least Yako's was. She sounded like a robot! All the dramaticness was killed by the cheesy voice acting. Music would have been nice. Maybe if you started earlier, you could have had more time, and with that time, greatly improved on this. Well that's enough constructive criticism for me.