Ahi nomas Dx

No me gusto del todo, pareces una copia mas de vinnie, trata de cambiar tu estilo de dibujo. El problema de las voces no es tan grave, es facil encontrar voice actors en el foro. La historia trabajala mas, esta demasiado simple, e intenta conseguir ayuda con los dialogos en ingles, apenas vi el video, el primer error fue que pusiste "I kill him" queriendo decir "Lo matare", la traduccion correcta es "I will kill him" o "' i'll kill him" abreviado.
Espero ver resultados en tu proximo flash

very dramatic

i think that it could be better if you
put some voiceovers

has potential... i guess

You need a proper english translation fo your script. The graphics werent too bad, but the plot line didnt seem to go anywhere. if its designed as the into to a series it needs t be more epic to get people's attention. Needs work.

Wow

This just shows that something doesn't have to be 1MB+ in order to be good! It doesn't have voices but it has audio and it isn't just a bunch of stick figures. The song is fitting for the mood of the story and it's just an overall good job. I would like to see more on this story...including a prequel maybe.

:PPP

buena animacion! estaria mucho mejor si tuviera voces pero te quedo muy muy bien! felicitaciones :P