Okay, first off, the music in the pre-loader. It stops after x number of seconds and never starts again--I'd recommend looping it or taking it out all together.
The face and the screams are annoying to say the least.
The first section really made no sense whatsoever.
The last two sections were only in the top left corner of the screen, which made ti difficult to see them.
Not really cohesive and felt very choppy in the way it was done.
It would have been nice if there was an over-all music theme and if it made a leeetle bit more sense.