U scared my dog !
You could work on yours graphics and animations techniques but the most important thing is that annoying scream that totally scared my poor dog !
well keep working !
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yeah sort of a horror movie but not really that scary.
you bet your ass there's gonna be a sequel.
evilchickennugget responds:
which scream there were several unnecessary screams.
Review again....
I remember you from a few days ago.
I reviewed your 'the waiter' submission ever read it?
anyways i can see an improvment but you still need to work on shit.
for instance i see you doing squigerly lines everywhere; it does'nt work try actually filling them in and then adding detail like shading
Now this aint a very structured review,like my other one, but thats cause i cant be bothered anyway you need to work on your backgrounds and the perportions of your people. to be real you need to work on everything i'd really like you to do better please reply to this if you get it lol then i'd know you read this altho this might get bammed
PM me if you need help or something of the sort
evilchickennugget responds:
you know whats funny I acyually made this before the waiter, but i put a shitload more work into this one to actually make people believe it.
