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Gene is Genetastic

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FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is gene on a saturday night t-BOEAORFHGH!! funny.

mmmmmhhhmmmm....

not quite sure how to say this but, u need animation and maybe some kind of thought about script. other wise i can see what your going for ad i can relate to it but your just no there yet. you need :
- better animation and drawings
- some music or sound effects
- and vocal emotion and maybe some rehersal

I wish more flash animations were like this!

I know the animation was not much, but it's a good start. ALSO I wish more submissions were like this, it's amusing and tells you about the author. If you ever do anything like this again, try to show more emotion.

I tried to save it...

I hope it didn't get blammed, it was funny... one tip for you though, if you ask people not to blam something, they almost definately will... :3

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3.75 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 29, 2008
12:48 AM EDT
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