I did such a disservice to myself not checking your work out.. i apologize for that and will make it up now because wow!! You have the style many are using now a days
Author Comments
This is a WIP that I didn't finish. In the middle of working on it, I decided to post what I had so far here on Newgrounds. This Flash is open to contructive criticism and new ideas. :) (I wanna know what your ideas are, too, ya know.)
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Original Idea was that he was going to weave through the city, and the missiles that were following him would hit stray objects. He emerges safely. :)
Alright, off to spar more with Flash.
it was good
it was ok but the graphic were bad
Hitorio responds:
If you explained more, I could improve it :(
Didn't Like It
I didn't like it on the basis that i hate silent movies,but i love it somehow...
so ill give it a...
Rating:7
Score:3
Hitorio responds:
Alright, lot's of people dislike the "no sound" part, so I'll try to look for stuff.
Looks great
Looks good so far. Having them weave through the city sounds cool.
It needs some music though. I'm sure you can find something appropriate in the Audio Portal.
Keep up the good work!
Hitorio responds:
Only if you drop by and check it out.
Storyless
It's weird that this starts right at the action with no story or reason whatsoever.
The drawings and animation are good, though the "Mach 5" animation needs to be different, because the way it is now feels sluggish and not speedy.
Hitorio responds:
As far as the Mach 5 animation, I feel the same way. Must change O.o
I'll come up with some sort of story for a later animation.