This was interesting
So it begins a Decent little flash here it had alot of stuf going on here and there, personality thats what I would call it you gave this flash some personality and thats what really caught my eye to it and kept me glued to the screen because it was interesting, differant, and unique, so nice job on keeping up the interest level. The visuals are pretty darn good here, its like watching a big movie here with lots of special effect and all, very good ideas here. And so here we come to the end of the review, dont want to drag the review on forever but in a nutshell I found this flash entertaining and somewhat amusing, could use a few fixes here and there as explained below, keep up with the style you got going its good, and be more creative and more random. you can never go wrong with beingtoo random, anyways good luck.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have Utilised some good ideas, Ironing out a few more will help, So I will Recommend A few things, So here you can make some changes just a few more tweeks and simulations could improve on a few things, And some positive improvments can happen for sure, So try some things out. I would love to see some "DIALOG" and voices and whatnot to ad depth to the story thats the only thing this really needs.