Pretty dull.

Stick movies, one of the most basic things to do in animation, but this isnt very brilliant on what it would be.

A preview it may be, but what I can judge from this preview/animation is that it looks pretty sloppy and lazy (And I can see from your author comments) but when you`re getting onto that stage, you will find yourself not even finishing off the full movie (And doubting that you will ever finish it)

The content on what it was going to be looks fine, hell, this may be a first animation for you, but it looks typically rubbish from my point of view, and possibly to others if they`ll start watching and reviewing this.

My only advice to say is that spend time, maybe watch some other peoples stick animations, you may learn a bit and see how you they are made out, you dont have to be a super animation whizz, but in time, you will get to that point where you`ll be able to work up on animations quite easily and not so sloppy.