lawl gay storyline good animation
well from what i hear from pivot you made the story really really gay so ive gotta say it sucks...but animation was good keep it up man
Author Comments
So yeah people, this flash sucked. My animator Guitar-Fish ruined this flash and changed a lot of the story. There was a big action scene where he combos off trees and really cool stuff, but he replaced it with a white screen with the word "LAME" and his own character from another flash blowing up. I fired Guitar-Fish for wasting 5 weeks on this, and I am sorry that is sucked. Expect a better episode before 2009.
i laugh to your story writing skills
lol
ChaosBeam21 responds:
To anyone who reads this, this is the animator. He is what ruined this flash.
impressive...
series has a good plot to it, guy who can change a pogo stick into anything...
i'd have to give it a 7/10 and a 4/5 though lacked humor...
try to improve on that aspect everything else is solid....other than voices had to adjust volume a couple times to hear it (no deduction though)
ChaosBeam21 responds:
Thanks, yeah this was a quick flash. I hired a new animator and a new male voice actor so next episode should have some good humor. I am actually drawing out on paper Episode 2 so that way the animator has no say in how the flash looks.
Right on, Right on...
Keep it Up...
ChaosBeam21 responds:
Thanks a lot!
Ehh...
It was worth watching. Please spell-check next time... idk if you did that on purpose, but it's so annoying seeing spelling errors. You've set yourself up with a great start, this thing has a ton of potential to become something special.
Good job and good luck.
ChaosBeam21 responds:
Thanks Jmac. Yeah my animator changed so much of this flash.