Not that bad for a first flash

okay here umm...
1. make the writing go a little faster or have some sound effect like scribbling or typing(and of course voices are normally better than words
2. you said you like anime so were is the unnecessarily huge sword or other form of weapon lol
3. the movements should look less like a copy paste and more like real movement

do these things and this good be a really good short flash

Well its not stickmen. And the end was funny

Pretty good for a first flash, since most first flahses seejavascript:submission_controller.G etReviewController().SaveReview();
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The music was really cool, you should probably have listed what the song was, and the end was pretty funny, but the sideways writing was pretty annoying.
Overall, decent flash movie.
I voted 5 because of the face you actually tried and you didn't use stickmen