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IS MY FIRST ANIMATION AFTER ARDUOUS WORKING HOURS, IS SHORT BUT THE SECOND PART LASTED BUT ALREADY THE END COMES, ENJOY IT

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^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty good. Definitely above average for your first movie. You added some good sound effects in here too. I'm sure the second episode will be even more successful than this one.

^^Needs Improving^^
Needs some music to fill in the gaps. The beginning I have no suggestions, but something ambient would fit well towards the end.

Rock3guito responds:

Thank you for your comments, especially those who point out my mistakes to improve my work.

I promise that the second part will be much better

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