movement
overall great, but the fighting scene could use a little improvement, i.e. struggling people, screams, ect.
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HEEAALLO
this was for school extention studies to answer the question
"can i make a cartoon on flash MX" yea i can but its still dodgy like stuff i needa get onto some skills.
but anyway here it is.
Plot:
its an old dude whos tryna bring demons into the human world via some portal, royal guards on horses are chasing him trying to stop him before it happens. the portals in a cave..
not too sure if ill finish the story i had a full story written out but once i got started it got hella boring
im still a beginner at this stuff ..or 'Noob' for the losers.
it'd be cool if people could gimme ideas for the rest of the story.
thanks
Sorry that there is no credits - It stuffed up and it wouldnt let me save because of some stupid error.
but yeah.. i did all the animating..
downloaded my SFX from a bunch of random sources and the music is japanese kitaro drums.
NEW- at the moment its so hard to draw for ages, i do all my drawing with a mouse.. soon as i get a tablett ill try and continue the story
Edit: 2012. haha.. I can't beleive how terrible animated the movement is.
HAYDS510 responds:
alright cheers for the tip :)
Pretty good
Overall the animation was good. The horses looked a bit awkward though, their gait was unnatural, I think it would have helped you to watch actual horses running and then incorporate that knowledge into your animation.
HAYDS510 responds:
Yeah i know what u mean. probably one of the things ill definately have to work on, i did go on youtube and watch horses running beforehand but i just couldnt tell which leg was which
Wow!
That was extreamly cool! I really really liked it! The storyline is awesome, as is the animation. You are extreamly good for a beginner.
HAYDS510 responds:
thanks man :D