Quite the discovery
Alright, so firstly, I'm going to say that there is no way this will be getting turd of the week :) Quite honestly, considering this was done in a matter of 2 days, I'm am EXTREMELY surprised with the length and quality that was in the flash. I really would like to see what you can do when you have more time on your hands.
There were a few things that stuck out to me in this flash (All of which were good.) First, I really liked the background you gave. It kind of fleshes out the story and makes the flash a whole lot more meaningful when you watch it. Personally, I would kind of like to see you make a prologue, or a flash that kind of shows either how the world came about, or something along those lines. That's completely up to you though. Anyways, lemme just say few things about that flash really quickly.
First, I don't really quite understand the motion capture at the beginning. You might have been trying to get some kind of effect (like maybe motion capture being the real world and the drawn flash being inside the dream world?) but it didn't really come across clear to me. Not that it was bad, but I didn't quite know what to think.
Secondly, I really like your animation style. It's simple but it does a great job. And I liked the the way Khay and Lhina looked. I think you should keep that, even if you change your animation style. I didn't quite understand what or who the little black guy was. I think it's a Fuzz but I'm not quite sure. But he was cute :P
Back to your animation style: I really like the way this is told without words. Some flashes are meant to have voices. This one, I think is best told the way you did, with music to set the mood and icons like (!) and (?) to indicate how a character is reacting.
On another note, I do have something to say about the music. There was a nice selection, but at times I felt the changes a little too fast paced. I think that the same effect could be achieved possibly with less songs. While all the transitions make sense, sometimes too many can overwhelm a viewer (at least in my opinion anyways.)
Just remember, all this is my opinion :) Constructive criticism :D
The fight scene was decent. Not spectacular, but then again,for a 2 day flash it was definately good enough. Once again I would like to see what you could explore here given more time :)
Overall, the flash was very cute, very well thought out and I think very good as a whole. I would really like to see you further pursue this story. Even if you don't continue with these characters, the universe you've thought up is pretty original and I'd like to see more submissions from you.
Wonderful first submission, keep making these. My rating for this is a 9/10 and a 5/5 (I round up ^^)