I love reviewing and I love reviewing stuff like this so im glad I was able to find this piece you have presented here, you have offered some nifty little flash of works here and it has kept me somewhat interested, so nice job here, Nothing was overused in this, infact this flash submission was pretty Refreshing so thats why I liked it. Wow I must say this was something different slightly disturbing but I found it interesting I like the characters you brought to life here and the whole "CONCEPT" of this film was interesting and different. OK so while this review is almost comming to an end I found this flash submission to be fun somewhat entertaining, it had some good visuals and showed some of your effort put into this, so keep at it as this was notbad at all.
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Little touches make all the difference, I was amused with this flash as it brought some entertainment value, and some other elements that brought stuff together but then there was some weaker points that could be worked on, and adressed more. You have a good idea here, and I can see this becomming a series of sorts maybe cutting it a tad shorter though.