dude,

i see POTENTIAL, bad thing is that im not gettin enough effort

that was really really really really really bad

MOVIE ! WHAT WERE YOU doing that was waek dag i hate it=(

Decent

The animations were good, but there weren't many frames. By the time it was loaded, it went to quick to see anything actually happen.

Comments on Length and Action Script

Your animation was way too short. I don't mind short animations, but there should be more than 10 seconds worth. I understand that you did this FBF so it's a pain in the ass to do. I give you credit for that.

It also needs to stop. Your animation just loops. You need some action script. On your last frame of the animation, go to Actions and select from among the actions, stick in "stop". Simple as that. You'll need a Replay button to get it to play again, but there are plenty of Newgrounds tutorials to find out how to do that. Or you can forget the "Stop" action and just put in a preloader. Newgrounds has plenty of those and they come with easy instructions on how to use them. The preloader can also act as your replay. Once the animation ends, it will go back to the preloader.

Short And Sweer

Thats how we like it