Like the message
I like the message of the animation, but the flash itself needs some more work.
Good for a start though, so keep on going!
Author Comments
My very first flash movie EVER! Be kind. It is for a University project. Whatever my average score is will give me bonus marks.
Also, I'm VERY new to flash, know only basics.
awww
Will do for your project, but for newgrounds submitions you still got a way to go.
But kudos on actually trying on your first flash movie. Keep working, practicing then work on a submittion hard and submit it here.
P.S. plz no stick figures
Melodic
That was not all that bad for your first flash. My only suggestion and the only thing that really bothered me was the stickmans movement. You should have looked at some tutorials to animate his walk a little better. Other than that, the plot was decent and the music fit in well.
Thanticore responds:
I know, it bothered me too... Things is, I kinda started quite late, SO I had to be quick or else I would've missed the deadline. Thanks for the constructive criticism! I appreciate it!
okay..
Cute little movie but you need to work a little on the animation
Awesome!
That was spectacular for your first flash! Had an awesome message too! Can't wait to see more from you!