Lots of heart, but the music needs to be lower, the voice needs to be louder and she needs to enunciate and take her time saying the words. Simply put, she sounds rushed
Look, i know that people here would rather be killing zombies than watching sentimental stuff, but when its good, at least review it fairly.
yah its beautiful...
i guess... i really didnt made it past the first 20 seconds it was so slow..
I dunno really what to say... The animation was ok and lil music loop was ok and the narration was again ok..
It reminds me of the bad times when i had to study this poem for GCSE! lol
Uhhh... this is NEWGROUNDS!
Look, you want to submit some sentimental thing, go to Devientart or where ever you artsy-fartsy people go.. I was waiting for someone to get their head blown off, because this is NEWGROUNDS!!!