Good points and bad points

Good Points - I thought it was quite funny, I like the way the cat thing eats the guy's arm and then says "I'm Okay" after it gets shot, that was great. That style of random comedy works for me - sometimes.

Bad Points - the clay models / figures were awful, try and make them look slightly more lifelike

Finally - the animation was actually quite good, although there is a lot of room for improvement.

Good effort!

Nice to see a young guy with some follow through. Keep at it...the story lines will come.

honestly.

i think some of the reviews are a little harsher than they need to be. You tried, it wasn't successful. Just work on a script more and the voice acting again and I think you'll do fine.

Ugh

Claymation takes no effort, just time =/
Plus, get your older brother to do your voice acting, because it's awkward listening to a 9 year old try to be funny for 3 minutes.

i GUESS the comedy was OKAY, but it wasn't as good as it could be.

awesome

how long did it take you to do this? I know claymation is very hard