These are interesting
This Is an alright animation. Its not perfect but it is obvious you have potential. And ist also obvious that you have put some time and good amount of effort to really make this into something special, now ofcourse it could use a few fixes and adjustments for some even more improving points, but thats for later. These are funny and I think I reviewed one of these before but you have some good humor and theres a good vibe about this all, nice job indeed. but overall this was a pretty good tune, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash I really enjoyed it, heep up the hard work, as I know these flash types and styles can take time. So what else can I say here, except keep up the efforts and keep on putting as much quality as you can, in the end it will show off and shine.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we are once again in the improvment area, and before I do get to that, its a decent flash submission youhave, but could use some fixing and cleaning up on areas, Some of these ideas will do greatly on this whole piece, and I do look forward to seeing some upgrades and improved details, so give it a shot. Think I mentioned this before but some "SUBTITLES" would be a great touch here.
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