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Piracy

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This is my first real flash movie. It is for a university project. If you give me a high score, I will get more bonus points!

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Well Done!

Good animation - Well done! If this is your first animation then I'm surely looking forward to the next ones. Keep it up.

its quite nice...

i'll vote beginner wise, its ok. for a firsty, nice patience and length. sound quality was low though, especially the journal part. your story was interesting but your lack of animation "action" kept it behind. just work on animation and sound and you can seriously amount to epic pirate stories. :) nice work ( i hope im not ruining you grade with this... heh...) also, the art was fin though, but make a few more joints [being complex doesnt ALWAYS mean your dumb... cough]

UnklPhil responds:

thank you for your review, i'll definitely work on my action animation and my sound recording.

I LOVE YOU

OMG I LOVE THE PIRATE BAY AND EVERYTHING FINALLY SOMEONE MADE A FLASH ABOUT . 5/5 10/10 and a place in my favorites!!!

Awesome!

I love the idea of pirates and windows, and especially the pirate bay sign, but it lacks animation quality and graphics, otherwise I love it!

hmmm

well i see you put a lot of effort into this but you have alot of work ahead of you
you need to sync the voice acting better. :) tray and do your art work outside of MS paint i cant say for sure its done there but it appears that way and its good for MS paint but thats old news. i think what bothered me most was the fact that the people looked like duplo block people. not bad but it needs work there are 3 essential elements to making flash .
1. the artwork which is animated
2. the audio that is in the flash
3. actual animation

your strongest point was the animation and it was slow it seemed things where moving in slow motion.

not bad but not great.

also trying to get extra score by telling them its for University is only gonna make people vote lower.... and also i dont see how that can be true as no university would grade your work bast on the opnions of the people on this site 60% of the people on ng dont vote basted on artistic or animation skill. its the fall of man!

:) good luck and keep working hard

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Votes
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Score
4.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 16, 2008
11:03 PM EDT
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