NOt as good as your neew one's
Still you can see how your style developed.
Yes STYLE, of you must not change lol
Hav fun making more ^_^
Author Comments
This one is less about art and more about the intense plot. With up and coming actor Cox Dagless (Starring as Chester Smokzeout) its bound to be a smash hit. Just read the reviews!
"Big budget films like this almost always get too carried away with the big stars and the cocain parties but the director seems to have found a good balance of coked up super stars" -Jackov Smirnoff "Weekly Nutter" 5/5
"The visuals are lackluster but all the sex and non stop action gets me all hot and bothered" -Kelsy Gummer "Worder Snake" 3/5
"Just when I thought actor Buster Knots (Playing "Harold Erbawls") was at the peak of his career he comes out with another smash hit like this" -Leopold Taint "Moviesthatmovemes.com" 5/5
"The heart of America" -Ivana Dyke "Worder Snake" 5/5
BrotherHaas responds:
I will thank you.
ugh
Really bad drawing, and no flow in the storyline. I was only thinking: "when is something going to happen" and "man this is slow" going on in my head. The only plus was the animation on their mouths. Well, better luck next time.
BrotherHaas responds:
1. Nothing ever happens
2. Storyline?
3. At least its not lame ass stick men.
4. I made this movie in like 5 hours so everything you say is probably right.
Thank you.
better than some
better than some but worse than others.
BrotherHaas responds:
Fair enough.
graphics - 10/10
I just love the way you drew characters in this animation .D
BrotherHaas responds:
Thank you very much you're a great audiance.
Noting to It
This flash really doesn't really offer a lot. There isnt a lot of effort that has been put into this. However the plot was farily simple to follow and you didnt overcomplicate this in any part of the flash. There is much room for improvement. Maybe start by making your next piece flow a bit quiker with better animation. Try being a bit more daring with your next flash and try a plot that could last a bit longer, make sense(as this did) and go for something with a bit more action and purpose to it. Also I thought that the sounds you used for the telephone and the doorbell were a bit strange and didnt help the flash. Overall though there is potential and let me know about your next piece
BrotherHaas responds:
I'd say thats pretty much spot on considering I spend very little time making my movies cos I lose interest too fast and if I dont make em in a single run then they usually get deleted or forgotten. I'm currently looking for help on making my movies have stories that I dont just make up as I go along and maybe some better voice acting. Thank you for your concern. Plus my computer is in my closet... so yeah.
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3.42 / 5.00
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