Hi back.
Ok, you made this flash really faster thant I tought you would do. You really improved yourself between the two in a so short period of time. However there is still some things I think you could ameliorate.
1) Good points: you made a larger screen(and I learned how to write this word.¬¬) which is a nice thing I think. Better action, more mouvement. Really nice. You made flash effects too on the screen and even on the caracters. I didn't think to put flash on them but I sure that it was a good idea, nice job. They're is a play button before the video start(happy to see that you were able to put one.^^) and you made the video longer. I really fund it funny when the green one said that he had to learn how to teleport. You put some explosions and I think it's a nice thing. I suggest you to search for other explosions sprite and add some.
2) Things to improve. There is still no music and that's the main reason I didn't give you 8. I'll pm you some link to be sure you'll put some in the next episode because I think that the main lack in your submission. I think that I've heard some new sounds( what is that "no!" thing? ) but I think that you should put more.. really. I'll pm you some too if I can. You made a larger screen, really nice, seriously, but if you could make it move(up left right) or make it zoom(in out) it would be superb.
3) Other: I've read the other's reviews about your last video and here is my opinion: To add a senario is not a bad idea, we're in a battle and we don't really know what is going on. However, i suggest you to finish this little story to learn how to do great flash and to improve yourselfe then, after, to do a series with a scenario on it own. If you're interested, it doesn't mean it should really be done, I think that if we could press spacebar ou something to be sure that your caracter don't speak to fast could be a good idea.
I think it's all. I suggest you to continue, seem to be really good. If there is anything else you're not sure about and you would like to have my opinion don't be shy.
Keep up the good work
William Side