it was great, "this is why your father left us" just killed me XD, your animation skills are great, and the dialogues were fun, yep, only thing that needs fixing is the mic recording, the voices are well done, but the interference is the one who gets in the way.
And about being your first animation, It's totally beyond others, I wouldn't have imagined it was your first if I didn't read it in your comment. Great job!
I've seen it a lot of times, and didn't notice till now that I haven't wrote a review :P
Thanks for using my cover of evanescence!