Lol

it was great, "this is why your father left us" just killed me XD, your animation skills are great, and the dialogues were fun, yep, only thing that needs fixing is the mic recording, the voices are well done, but the interference is the one who gets in the way.
And about being your first animation, It's totally beyond others, I wouldn't have imagined it was your first if I didn't read it in your comment. Great job!

I've seen it a lot of times, and didn't notice till now that I haven't wrote a review :P

Thanks for using my cover of evanescence!

Still as funny as when I first saw it.

The idea is great, and that is the strongest thing that any narrative, flash animation or otherwise, needs. The humor is there, the pacing is solid, and while the drawings aren't particularly refined, they work together very well to form a style. The sound quality... That's what's killing you the most. Practice is all you need, really.

First animation? Good try

I totally agree with Kodman, a very good start for your newground debut. But yes, minor things like the sound quality could be improved, animating could of been perked up a little, but only a little, and this could have an award. Its good for halloween, the animating style reminded me of the late 80's cartoons, though in a good way. Well done on this. 6/10.

A nice start

It's pretty good on any standards, and great for a first try. Like GOTHtheDEATHBRINGER said, it just needs some better sound quality. It's a genuine flash, and a nice addition to the vast Newgrounds collection, and I hope to see improvements in any work you make after this. Master the movement tweens a little more, try a little less skectchy drawing and get one of those cool screens for your mic so you don't get any static(it'll cost you like $10-$30, but thats a estimation)... Based on the fact it's your first submission, and the quality is about average to begin with, I'll agree with Jmac-08's score of a 7/10, thoiugh I also voted a 4/5

Good.

A better mic would be nice. Some of the animations and drawing were poor, plus it had a rough look to it overall...