okay...here i go
this flash is pretty darn good
the good things about it:
the detail put into the cars
the style
and the plot
the things that need improvement:
the music...it cant be playing that loudly, it has to be background noise, not music used to fill silences, especially when they're talking, i couldnt here most of the things they said because of the music
the fluency of the stick figures....the movement seems alittle edgy, like its jagged. the proportions of the body need adjustment as well, the body is too long while the head is too small, although not too bad altogether, but need improvement when you look at it seperately
i have to say though, even though i could barely hear it, it really wasnt a bad length
it was pretty much a perfect length actually, and wouldve been tons better if i could hear
thats like thte main thing that needs improvement, the sound
also, you might want to see if you can find voice actors, cause all the voices sounded pretty much the same to me, idk if one person did all of the voices or w/e, but thats what i heard
keep up the good work!