Hey Newgrounds!
Thanks for checking this out I hope you like it. It's a short about two flowers madly in love, however I personally think it's not meant to be. This flash was originally called 'Flower Power' but that name was taken. So was 'Flowers', so I decided to use the title of a poem called 'Let Our Love Die Not' by Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi (I'm not intelligent enough to know this poem I googled it...)
I'm working on two other projects:
- Rocket Crotch: Halloween Special (EDIT: I have now finished!)
- Johnny and the Portals
Trying to get them done ASAP. I'm still quite a newbie so any thoughts and comments will be mega helpful. Cheers!
With Audio
Great work Chris, even better with the music and sound effects. Although honestly, that live dub you did earlier when soud was not working was pretty fucking impressive. I mean you got the timing and everything. Anyway awsome toon man, it's a great idea and I really like your animation style, the David bit is my favorite.
Mike
:O :O :O :O XD
that was awesome!
nice work :D
maybe you could of exported it with the sound quality a little higher but hey,
im in no position to pass judgement.
keep 'em coming chris!
(Y)
cheers tim!!! looking forward to cheeseman!!
Hahahahahaha
Fucking spot on man
Even though you'd told me the punchline before the delivery was ace
Only bad thing was that the music kinda ovverided the voices but hey
arghh never mind, first flashes are never 100% spot on but we learn thru advice and shizzz as you well know. next project, rocket crotch. its coming along well actually, shud be ready for halloween!
I give you the lolz
Indeed, good for a first flash! Not alot of animation but it was humorous. I loved the end. My only real beef with this is the sound. The music choice was alright, definitely added to the whole lubby-dubby scene-ness, but it was overbearing. It blared right over the voices. That's a big thing to remember for pleasing viewers : good video quality AND good sound quality. One without the other will just end in tears. Good job sir.
Looking back at it know yeah it is quite over the top. thanks for the review, i'll bere it all in mind for my other flash movies, cheers dude
nice
very nicely done for your first newgrounds flash. the art was very well drawn for your first time(Even though there wasn't much animation). It was a clever idea but i can't say it gave me many laughs.
I have a feeling you will do very well as you practice though:)
Cheers! You didn't even enjoy the end? Lol